Third Task of Writing 3

1.     1.  Give description on how to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion.

A paragraph wiil be look good if composed of coherence and cohesion. In this case, I will post about adequate and inadequate cohesion in writing, because in the last I  have postedq about coherence. well, let’s talk about it. Before write the paragraph, we have to know  the topic or the idea that will be discuss, when we have choose a tpoic sentence, it will be easily to make supporting sentence, after write a supporting sentence the writer should conclude their idea with concluding sentence. and there are some other component that should be focusses like  reference, substitution, Ellipsis, Lexical Chains, Cohesive Nouns and Conjunction.

2.    2..   Tell more about cohesion !

Cohesion is needed in writing cause it uses language effectively to guide the reader read the text. Cohesion is holds or link or connect a sentence with another sentence, to make a paragraph become whole pargraph.

3.     3.  Write more about the difference between coherence and cohesion !

a.    Cohesion refers to link or connect or hold a sentence to another sentence,  it can help the reader read a whole paragraph.

b.    Choherence refers to how logically the peragraph is, so that the rader can understand about the point of the paragraph.

4.      Show which text or sentence that shows adequate or inadequate cohesion on your paragraph by underlining or putting in the table!

            Who am I ?

            Well, I would like to give you an explanation and a description about my self. For someone who already known me, I think they will not be surprise about my explanation, but for the other who have not know me before, it will be good for you to read this paragraph carefully and pay attention for my world and also imagine how I is look like.

            What can be the first? yaa, my name, my name is Septining Astuti, what can you guess from my name? of course a javanese name and a month name because I was born on September, 13^th 1994 in Santa Maria Hospital, Metro Lampung and I am a real Javanese girl. I was born from a couple of parent, my father’s name is Mistam with a handsome wise man, and my mother’s name is Rubiyah with a beautiful long hair and sweet face. I am a a simple girl from a simply family, I have a couple of parent, two brothers and I am the only and the last daughter in my family. I live with my family in Margodadi 25a South Metro especially in Nusantara street and you can find my home around the ricefield because my home is in the village.

            I am 19 years old, now  I am an undergraduate student in Muhammadiyah University of Metro since 2012, now I am in the fourth semester of English Education Study Program. Iam a fat girl, I don’t know why, maybe because of the decline, I am 160cm so you can imagine how fat I am. I have round face with a short wavy black hair. My eyes are round and  black and my nose is standard I mean not too pointed and not too flat, I have thick and red lips. I have a sweet brown skin, as you know I live in tropical area so I can not have a pure white skin, although I have had tried to use whitening skin product.

            Sometime, I really confuse if someone ask me about my hobby, because I really have so many thing that I like to do, I like singing, I like shopping, I like cooking and there are so many other that I can not mention one by one.  Some of my friends tell me that I am a smart girl, but sometimes I am a lazy girl because I often lazy to do the assignment. I am a moody girl, I really ambisious about something new but after that I feel bored of that. I really interest for  being an English teacher, so that’s why I take Teacher Training and  education Faculty especially in English Department.

            That’s all the little explanation  about me, you can read while imagine how Septining Astuti is look like and How is the apperiece of me. Now you already know Who I am, if you need more explanation you can ask me whenever.

5.      You should explain why your text or sentence that you underline is categorized into cohesion.

No	Sentence	Reasons
1	my name is Septining Astuti, what can you guess from my name? of course a javanese name and a month name because I was born on September, 13th 1994 in Santa Maria Hospital, Metro Lampung and I am a real Javanese girl	Because it relevance, the writer said that she is a real javanese girl, so her name is javanese name.
2	I live with my family in Margodadi 25a South Metro especially in Nusantara street and you can find my home around the ricefield because my home is in the village.	Because the writer’s home is in the village, so the home is arround the ricefield. Rellevance and use transition because.
3	I am 19 years old, now  I am an undergraduate student in Muhammadiyah University of Metro since 2012, now I am in the fourth semester of English Education Study Program.	Because the writer in university sice 2012 and  in the 4th semester, because one year for two semester. “relevance”.
4	I have a sweet brown skin, as you know I live in tropical area so I can not have a pure white skin, although I have had tried to use whitening skin product.	Because the writer live in tropical area so can’t get the white skin, cause tropical area is very hot. “using transition so”
5 6	Some of my friends tell me that I am a smart girl, but sometimes I am a lazy girl because I often lazy to do the assignment. I really interest for  being an English teacher, so that’s why I take Teacher Training and  education Faculty especially in English Department.	The writer often lazy to do assigment, refers to her friends said that she is sometimes lazy girl. “relevence”. Because the writer wannabe an english teacher, so she take english education program. “using transition and relevance”.

 That's all about Cohesion, see you next tuesday :)