1. Give
description o how to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate unity !
When we want to make a paragraph, we have
to know the point or the structure to developing the paragraph, the first is
about the topic sentence that will be discuss. Then, after determine the topic
sentence, combine the sentences that have a coherences. After that, Arrange all
those aspects into a paragraph, the writing will be a good written if all the
sentences in the paragraph has a correlation and continues. Finally, determine
the concluding sentence of the text, we can choose what kind of concluding
sentence that we wat to use, such as Logical conclusion, Sugestion conclutio,
summary conclusion and prediction conclusion.
2. Tell
more about coherence
Coherence is one of two criteria for
making a good paragraph. The criteria for make a good paragraph are coherence
and unity. if in a paragraph there is no one of the criteria, so the paragraph
is hard to understand.
3. Write
the tittle !
The tittle of my writing is “ Who am I”
4. Answer
the question !
5. Identified
by giving the different colors for identification and description!
Who
am I ?
Well, I would like to give you an
explanation and a description about my self. For someone who already known me,
I think they will not be surprise about my explanation, but for the other who
have not know me before, it will be good for you to read this paragraph
carefully and pay attention for my world and also imagine how I is look like.
What
can be the first? yaa, my name, my name is Septining Astuti, what can you guess
from my name? of course a javanese name and a month name because I was born on
September, 13th 1994 in Santa Maria Hospital, Metro Lampung and I am
a real Javanese girl. I was born from a couple of parent, my father’s name is
Mistam with a handsome wise man, and my mother’s name is Rubiyah with a
beautiful long hair and sweet face. I am a a simple girl from a simply family,
I have a couple of parent, two brothers and I am the only and the last daughter
in my family. I live with my family in Margodadi 25a South Metro especially in
Nusantara street and you can find my home around the ricefield because my home
is in the village.
I am 19 years old, now I am an undergraduate student in Muhammadiyah
University of Metro since 2012, now I am in the fourth semester of English
Education Study Program. Iam a fat girl, I don’t know why, maybe because of the
decline, I am 160cm so you can imagine how fat I am. I have round face with a
short wavy black hair. My eyes are round and
black and my nose is standard I mean not too pointed and not too flat, I
have thick and red lips. I have a sweet brown skin, as you know I live in
tropical area so I can not have a pure white skin, although I have had tried to
use whitening skin product.
Sometime, I really confuse if
someone ask me about my hobby, because I really have so many thing that I like
to do, I like singing, I like shopping, I like cooking and there are so many
other that I can not mention one by one.
Some of my friend tell me that I am a smart girl, but sometime I am a
lazy girl. I am a moody girl, I really ambisious about something new but after
that I feel bored of that. I really interest for being an English teacher, so that’s why I
take Teacher Training and education
Faculty especially in English Department.
That’s all the little
explanation about me, you can read while
imagine how Septining Astuti is look like and How is the apperiece of me. Now
you already know Who I am, if you need more explanation you can ask me
whenever.
Note :
Black : Tittle
Red :
Introduction
Orange : Identification
Green :
Description
Blue :
Conclusion
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