1. 1.
Give description on how to write
paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion.
A
paragraph wiil be look good if composed of coherence and cohesion. In this
case, I will post about adequate and inadequate cohesion in writing, because in
the last I have postedq about coherence.
well, let’s talk about it. Before write the paragraph, we have to know the topic or the idea that will be discuss,
when we have choose a tpoic sentence, it will be easily to make supporting
sentence, after write a supporting sentence the writer should conclude their
idea with concluding sentence. and there are some other component that should
be focusses like reference, substitution, Ellipsis, Lexical
Chains, Cohesive Nouns and Conjunction.
2. 2..
Tell more about cohesion !
Cohesion
is needed in writing cause it uses language effectively to guide the reader
read the text. Cohesion is holds or link or connect a sentence with another
sentence, to make a paragraph become whole pargraph.
3. 3.
Write
more about the difference between coherence and cohesion !
a.
Cohesion
refers to link or connect or hold a sentence to another sentence, it can help the reader read a whole
paragraph.
b.
Choherence
refers to how logically the peragraph is, so that the rader can understand
about the point of the paragraph.
4.
Show which text or sentence that shows
adequate or inadequate cohesion on your paragraph by underlining or putting in
the table!
Who
am I ?
Well, I would like to give you an
explanation and a description about my self. For someone who already known me,
I think they will not be surprise about my explanation, but for the other who
have not know me before, it will be good for you to read this paragraph
carefully and pay attention for my world and also imagine how I is look like.
What
can be the first? yaa, my name, my name is Septining Astuti, what can you
guess from my name? of course a javanese name and a month name because I was born
on September, 13th 1994 in Santa Maria Hospital, Metro Lampung and I
am a real Javanese girl. I was born from a couple of parent, my father’s
name is Mistam with a handsome wise man, and my mother’s name is Rubiyah with a
beautiful long hair and sweet face. I am a a simple girl from a simply family,
I have a couple of parent, two brothers and I am the only and the last daughter
in my family. I live with my family in Margodadi 25a South Metro especially
in Nusantara street and you can find my home around the ricefield because my
home is in the village.
I am 19 years old,
now I am an undergraduate student in
Muhammadiyah University of Metro since 2012, now I am in the fourth semester of
English Education Study Program. Iam a
fat girl, I don’t know why, maybe because of the decline, I am 160cm so you can
imagine how fat I am. I have round face with a short wavy black hair. My eyes
are round and black and my nose is
standard I mean not too pointed and not too flat, I have thick and red lips. I
have a sweet brown skin, as you know I live in tropical area so I can not have
a pure white skin, although I have had tried to use whitening skin product.
Sometime, I really confuse if
someone ask me about my hobby, because I really have so many thing that I like
to do, I like singing, I like shopping, I like cooking and there are so many
other that I can not mention one by one.
Some of my friends tell me that I am a smart girl, but sometimes I am
a lazy girl because I often lazy to do the assignment. I am a moody girl, I
really ambisious about something new but after that I feel bored of that. I
really interest for being an English
teacher, so that’s why I take Teacher Training and education Faculty especially in English
Department.
That’s all the little
explanation about me, you can read while
imagine how Septining Astuti is look like and How is the apperiece of me. Now
you already know Who I am, if you need more explanation you can ask me
whenever.
5.
You should explain why your text or
sentence that you underline is categorized into cohesion.
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No
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Sentence
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Reasons
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1
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my name is Septining Astuti, what can you guess from
my name? of course a javanese name and a month name because I was born on
September, 13th 1994 in Santa Maria Hospital, Metro Lampung and I
am a real Javanese girl
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Because it relevance,
the writer said that she is a real javanese girl, so her name is javanese
name.
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2
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I live with my family in Margodadi 25a
South Metro especially in Nusantara street and you can find my home around
the ricefield because my home is in the village.
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Because the writer’s
home is in the village, so the home is arround the ricefield. Rellevance and
use transition because.
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3
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I am 19
years old, now I am an undergraduate
student in Muhammadiyah University of Metro since 2012, now I am in the
fourth semester of English Education Study Program.
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Because the writer in
university sice 2012 and in the 4th
semester, because one year for two semester. “relevance”.
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4
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I have a sweet brown skin, as you know I live in tropical area
so I can not have a pure white skin, although I have had tried to use
whitening skin product.
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Because the writer
live in tropical area so can’t get the white skin, cause tropical area is
very hot. “using transition so”
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5
6
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Some of
my friends tell me that I am a smart girl, but sometimes I am a lazy girl
because I often lazy to do the assignment.
I really interest for
being an English teacher, so that’s why I take Teacher Training
and education Faculty especially in
English Department.
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The writer often lazy
to do assigment, refers to her friends said that she is sometimes lazy girl. “relevence”.
Because the writer
wannabe an english teacher, so she take english education program. “using
transition and relevance”.
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That's all about Cohesion, see you next tuesday :)
