Jumat, 16 Mei 2014

Seventh Task of Writing 3

A Person You Admire

Someone who Always Besides me 

A Sweet handsome boy that always besides me everyday and every time. yups, he is my boyfriend, since 2011 and about 3 years I have a relationship with a boy that become my best friend before, it was in Senior High School. I met him when we in the first grade of senior high scholl. it was just so so and we became a friend just areal friend and never think that we will get something special. we become a friend till in the second grade of senior high school, and at the second times, we get the same class.

M. Aby Al-Rafvi that was his name, he has a sweet smile with a dimple in his cheeks, he has a large eyes with a curved eyelashes, he has pointed nose and thicks lips, his forehead is large, and his hair is so straight black flexible, it is make me envy of him, because i don't have a perfect hair laike him. he has a white teeth and stamp lang ear, he has a sweet brown skin, this is enough for me, because i don't like a man with white skin, because it can not balanced with my creamy yellow skin, he is fat, not slim, ya it is also balanced with my body.

Something that make me admire him, he is very kind boy,  from the first time we meet, i know that he is a kind boy, the other thing that make me love him maybe because something like proverb said in javanesse " tresno jalaran soko kulino" or we can say like habitual accustomed. two years become a friend with a kind boy make me amazed with hime and i admirer him secretly, but when in the third grade we have a poblem that make me think twice to admire him, but from that problemi can know that actually he loves me from the first grade.

when we have braid the relationship till now, i know he always give me spirit, he is a loyal boy, i can proove it because he never hurt my heart with something that make me angryful, he never close with the other girl except me, his mother and my mother. sometimes he has much emotional that make me want to break the relationship but, he appologize to me with all his heart.

He was born on April 06 1994, so he is is five years elder than me, he study in Muhammadiyah University of Metro in Accounting Major, now in the fourth semester, one campus with me, in the same semester also. he  live in Dahlia Street, 15polos Metro Pusat, He is The first son from his family, He has one younger brother,  now still in Kindergarten around five years. He has already work in the private office or BMT as an  employer  in accounting place.

Now, the only thing i wish to have is i can continue my relationship in the better step, after graduated from University of Muhammadiyah Metro, and get a better job, Insha Allah, he will become my Imam. Amin Ya Rabbal Alamin...

SIXTH Task of Writing 3



The Hardest Thing I have To Do

Sleep on Time

Sleep on time still become the hardest thing I have to do. Every day I always late woke up and pray shubuh, because every night i felt very difficult for sleep on time or we can said this one with Insomnia. I slept on 01.00 am or even 12.00 am. I did not know why, because I felt hard to close my eyes, when I can not sleep, I did not do anything except lay on my bed, but it still hard to close my eyes, when middle night came, I just can close my eyes immediately.

When the time for pray shubuh came, my mother  has wake me up more than one time, my alarm in my phone has already  alarmed me, but it was became a screaming dream for me. but I still can not open my eyes. This habitual really drove me crazy, because this thing made me late took a pray or maybe no pray shubuh in the morning.  Not only can not pray shubuh but also, I always late went to campus. Every morning my parents always gave me “a creamy breakfast”, you know what?  Yaaaa, the scream, the angriness and the other things that made me lazy to did anything, that’s the creamy breakfast that I got every morning because I late woke up and did not pray shubuh.

I have tried to do anything to handle this habitual, first, I have tried to leave my rest at afternoon, I did not took a nap for handle my sleepy at night, I though this one can made me sleepy after pray Isha, but this thing was failed. Second, I tried to ate much after maghrib, I though that this one would help me sleepy because my stomach was full of food, but this one was also failed. Then the last, I tried lay on my bed while close my eyes in long time, but I was failed also. Oh my God what should  I do for handle this thing?

The more crazy thing that I have done was drank “sleep medicine”, this method was success, but I did not continue this one,because I was think that this one was very dangerous if I did continuesly. Now I just can do something usefull for my night when I can sleep on time, like red a book, reciting qur’an or sometimes only watching movies. When there was an assigntment it was became an advantage for me, because I can did my assigntment while waiting my sleepy time. That was my horrible habitual every night, because it gave me bad impact.

Kamis, 24 April 2014

Fifth task of Writing 3



TTell the description of narrative writing and how to differ from other writing genres !
What is the definition of narrative text ?
            Narrative text is a kind of text which retell a past experience or accident. It can be personality experience or the story about something.
How To differ Narrative text with other genres ?
The way to different is simple, Just analyze  the generic structure of the text, then read carefully what kind of story above, is it narrative or recount, because both of them are almost same but The differences is just in complication of the story and also Narrative text usually tells about Fable, Legend, or dramatical story.

2.   Write the steps how to make a narrative writing. Don't forget to give example for every step !
aa) Give the tittle of the text.
            e.g : (Rejected from First Registration of Muhammadiyah University of Metro)    

b) Give the setting ( setting time and place).

e.g : Two years ago, I was graduated from senior high school, and I had a good chance to continue my study in University ( the bold one is the example of setting time)
My parents recommended for me to continue in Muhammadiyah University of Metro, because it is not too far from my home. ( the bold are example of setting place)


c) Decided the main character of the text.
            e.g : Two years ago, I was graduated from senior high school, and I had a good chance to continue my study in University. My parents recommended for me to continue in Muhammadiyah University of Metro, because it is not too far from my home. ( the example above showed that The writer decided herself to be main characters or participants)

d) Decided the topic sentence.
A failure experience of my life was rejected from first registration in Muhammadiyah University of Metro.


ce) Give the problem or complication ( can be more than one problem)
e.g : When I got information about Muhammadiyah University of Metro, I decided to choose English Department for my major, because I like English very much since I was in elementary school. At first, I came to Muhammadiyah Unversity of Metro to registered, after that I paid for the registration and collected all of the requirement for being an undergraduated student. A week later I got the test, the test was about the skills, interview test and reciting Al-qur’an. I was very nervous because I did not know that the interview test with English language, so I did not prepare anymore to speak English, and that was very messy. After that I passed the interview and continue to reciting Al-Qur’an.  And Alhamdulillah that was clear. ( the underlined sentences are the main problem of the writer)

f)     Give the resolution of the story.
e.g : Two weeks later, I came to University of Muhammadiyah Metro with my friend to look the announcement. At that time I was very confidence and believe that I can join as Undergraduated student of Muhammdadiyah University of Metro.  But when I came to looked at the announcement I was very shocked because only ten students that accepted, and there was no my name, I felt very shy with my parents and afraid to told them, and I decided to kept silent about that. After back from UM and went home, my parents asked me the result, and I said that I was rejected while cried. But my parents gave me support to follow the second registration, so I decided to follow the second chance.
At the second chance, I was prepare anything well. I prepared to speak English, reciting Al-quran and also for the writing test.i passed the second registration like before and for the test, I have been prepare so I was believe that I can pass well. And one week later, I looked at the announcement on internet, I always prayed every night because I won’t  make my parents disappointed with my result again. After that I looked how much the students that accepted in second registration, and looked there are about  twenty students, I looked from the top and I was shocked while screming, there was my name in the third number, suddenly my father came and ask wht happened with me, and I told my father that I have accepted and my father seem so happy.


3.      Rewrite your narrative writing, and show or underline the topic sentence on your writing.

Rejected from First Registration of Muhammadiyah University of Metro

A failure experience of my life was rejected from first registration in Muhammadiyah University of Metro. Two years ago, I was graduated from senior high school, and I had a good chance to continue my study in University. My parents recommended for me to continue in Muhammadiyah University of Metro, because it is not too far from my home.
When I got information about Muhammadiyah University of Metro, I decided to choose English Department for my major, because I like English very much since I was in elementary school. At first, I came to Muhammadiyah Unversity of Metro to registered, after that I paid for the registration and collected all of the requirement for being an undergraduated student. A week later I got the test, the test was about the skills, interview test and reciting Al-qur’an. I was very nervous because I did not know that the interview test with English language, so I did not prepare anymore to speak English, and that was very messy. After that I passed the interview and continue to reciting Al-Qur’an.  And Alhamdulillah that was clear.
Two weeks later, I came to University of Muhammadiyah Metro with my friend to look the announcement. At that time I was very confidence and believe that I can join as Undergraduated student of Muhammdadiyah University of Metro.  But when I came to looked at the announcement I was very shocked because only ten students that accepted, and there was no my name, I felt very shy with my parents and afraid to told them, and I decided to kept silent about that. After back from UM and went home, my parents asked me the result, and I said that I was rejected while cried. But my parents gave me support to follow the second registration, so I decided to follow the second chance.
At the second chance, I was prepare anything well. I prepared to speak English, reciting Al-quran and also for the writing test.i passed the second registration like before and for the test, I have been prepare so I was believe that I can pass well. And one week later, I looked at the announcement on internet, I always prayed every night because I won’t  make my parents disappointed with my result again. After that I looked how much the students that accepted in second registration, and looked there are about  twenty students, I looked from the top and I was shocked while screming, there was my name in the third number, suddenly my father came and ask wht happened with me, and I told my father that I have accepted and my father seem so happy. I was so happy at that time, and I lerned something, that the failure was not the ending.  Sometimes it only need more sacrifice.


4.   Explain why your sentence is called as the topic sentence?
 Topic sentences is the summarizes the main idea of the paragraph also known as focus sentences and acts as kind of summary. So, the writer decided A failure experience of my life was rejected from first registration in Muhammadiyah University of Metro As a topic sentence, because that sentence can be show that the text will be discuss is about that.



Tittle
Rejected from First Registration of Muhammadiyah University of Metro
Orientation
A failure experience of my life was rejected from first registration in Muhammadiyah University of Metro. Two years ago, I was graduated from senior high school, and I had a good chance to continue my study in University. My parents recommended for me to continue in Muhammadiyah University of Metro, because it is not too far from my home.
Complication
When I got information about Muhammadiyah University of Metro, I decided to choose English Department for my major, because I like English very much since I was in elementary school. At first, I came to Muhammadiyah Unversity of Metro to registered, after that I paid for the registration and collected all of the requirement for being an undergraduated student. A week later I got the test, the test was about the skills, interview test and reciting Al-qur’an. I was very nervous because I did not know that the interview test with English language, so I did not prepare anymore to speak English, and that was very messy. After that I passed the interview and continue to reciting Al-Qur’an.  And Alhamdulillah that was clear.
Resolution
Two weeks later, I came to University of Muhammadiyah Metro with my friend to look the announcement. At that time I was very confidence and believe that I can join as Undergraduated student of Muhammdadiyah University of Metro.  But when I came to looked at the announcement I was very shocked because only ten students that accepted, and there was no my name, I felt very shy with my parents and afraid to told them, and I decided to kept silent about that. After back from UM and went home, my parents asked me the result, and I said that I was rejected while cried. But my parents gave me support to follow the second registration, so I decided to follow the second chance.
Re-orientation
            At the second chance, I was prepare anything well. I prepared to speak English, reciting Al-quran and also for the writing test.i passed the second registration like before and for the test, I have been prepare so I was believe that I can pass well. And one week later, I looked at the announcement on internet, I always prayed every night because I won’t  make my parents disappointed with my result again. After that I looked how much the students that accepted in second registration, and looked there are about  twenty students, I looked from the top and I was shocked while screming, there was my name in the third number, suddenly my father came and ask wht happened with me, and I told my father that I have accepted and my father seem so happy. I was so happy at that time, and I lerned something, that the failure was not the ending.  Sometimes it only need more sacrifice.

Selasa, 08 April 2014

Forth Task of Writing 3



Rejected from First Registration of Muhammadiyah University of Metro

A failure experience of my life was rejected from first registration in Muhammadiyah University of Metro. Two years ago, I was graduated from senior high school, and I had a good chance to continue my study in University. My parents recommended for me to continue in Muhammadiyah University of Metro, because it is not too far from my home.
When I got information about Muhammadiyah University of Metro, I decided to choose English Department for my major, because I like English very much since I was in elementary school. At first, I came to Muhammadiyah Unversity of Metro to registered, after that I paid for the registration and collected all of the requirement for being an undergraduated student. A week later I got the test, the test was about the skills, interview test and reciting Al-qur’an. I was very nervous because I did not know that the interview test with English language, so I did not prepare anymore to speak English, and that was very messy. After that I passed the interview and continue to reciting Al-Qur’an.  And Alhamdulillah that was clear.
Two weeks later, I came to University of Muhammadiyah Metro with my friend to look the announcement. At that time I was very confidence and believe that I can join as Undergraduated student of Muhammdadiyah University of Metro.  But when I came to looked at the announcement I was very shocked because only ten students that accepted, and there was no my name, I felt very shy with my parents and afraid to told them, and I decided to kept silent about that. After back from UM and went home, my parents asked me the result, and I said that I was rejected while cried. But my parents gave me support to follow the second registration, so I decided to follow the second chance.
At the second chance, I was prepare anything well. I prepared to speak English, reciting Al-quran and also for the writing test.i passed the second registration like before and for the test, I have been prepare so I was believe that I can pass well. And one week later, I looked at the announcement on internet, I always prayed every night because I won’t  make my parents disappointed with my result again. After that I looked how much the students that accepted in second registration, and looked there are about  twenty students, I looked from the top and I was shocked while screming, there was my name in the third number, suddenly my father came and ask wht happened with me, and I told my father that I have accepted and my father seem so happy. I was so happy at that time, and I lerned something, that the failure was not the ending.  Sometimes it only need more sacrifice.
Note :
a. The purpose of  the text :
To tell the reader about the writer's failure experince when rejected from University.
b. The generic structure of the text : 

Red : Orientation ( introduction, characters)
Orange : Complication ( setting, plot, climax)
Green : Resolution ( conclusion)
Blue : Re-orientation
c. Topic sentence : Underlined sentence.
d. Theme : Failure experience
e. Plot : Forward
            f. Tittle : Rejected from First Registration of Muhammadiyah University of Metro
            g. Setting : - places: University of Muhammadiyah Metro, Writer’s home
                               - Time : Morning, Afternoon